Feedback From Presentation

When we showed our draft version of the film to our class they gave us the following feedback:

- They thought some of the slow motion we used was effective.

- They think that when we were running on the stairs we need to make the speed continuous to make it flow more.

- We also need to make the drumming music in time with the film so that it fits better and makes our film more appealing to the audience as it will be more intense.

- They thought that the black and white effect was good as it made it more stylistic and interesting.

- The liked all the different shot types, for example the low angle and high angle shots on the stairs.

- Our teacher doesn't think that our music fits well with our film so we are reconstructing it to make it fit to our film and the thriller genre.

- They said that the colour of our titles was good as the red contrasts with the black and white colouring of our film. However, we need to make the actual title of the film bolder and bigger.